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寫給母親的一封信英語作文
寫給母親的一封信英語作文
點評專家：
趙秀鳳，中國石油大學外國語學院教授、博士，全國英語創(chuàng)新大賽顧問委員會副主任，第十屆、第十一屆全國創(chuàng)新英語大賽評委。
參賽佳作
姓名：張家碧
學校：鄭州外國語學校
成績：97
A Letter to My Mom
Dear Mom，
I recently read the book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mom by Amy Chua. I found that you and Ms. Chua have a lot in common in parenting. Today, I’ d like to share some of my views on this topic.
Childhood memories of your strict “dos” and "don’ts" came flooding back. Because count- less hours were invested on practicing musicalinsUu- ments, there was not even a slim chance for me to participate in parties and school plays, let alone fully enjoy the authentic pleasures of family life.Moreover, deprived of the freedom to choose hob- bies, I sometimes felt that I was just like a lonely pup- pet manipulated by others. Dear mother, do you be- lieve that time and time again I woke up from beau- tiful dreams with tears streaming down my face?
However, though I´ve labeled it as a brutal regimen when I was young, as I became heavily involved inme outside world, I’ve come to realize that it was quite rewarding to have been tiger trained. As George Eliot putslt,"It never rains roses: when we want to have more roses, we must plant trees". This is as true of 0ur growing up, especially in an unprecedentedly stressful so- cietyr, Fortunately, tiger parenting has equipped me with exceptional study habits,thus helping me stand out in the intense competition. Furthermore, it has endowed me with strong willpower as well as inner self-poise, which bas proved to be a most pre- cious quality of mine. Finally,thanks to your firm discipline, not cmly have I cultivateda discerning taste in art, but I’ve also built my own set of moral values. In view of all these facts, tiger parenting has benefited me in the lorlg run despite the cost of the immediate joy of a normal carefree cbildhood.
Now, looking back on my childhood with your specialparenting method,I want to extend my sincerest appreciauon to you, my dear mother. As I am to commence my college life now,I promise you that I´ll improve myself ina "tiger" way, going all out to fulfill all of my dreams.
Love,
Daughter
專家點評：
通過這封寫給母親的信，作者把母親的教育方式和“tiger mom”的方式作對比，闡述自己的觀點。開篇簡潔明了，正文欲揚先抑，強調(diào)對“tiger training”的贊同，依此出發(fā)向母親表達深切感激之情。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，觀點明了，邏輯性強，行文通順。作者詞匯量豐富，長句駕馭能力強。建議適當改變句式，保證長短錯落有致。
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